You have been living in a rental apartment for the past year. Recently a new neighbour moved in who has loud parties several times a week. Write a letter complaining about this to the landlord. In your letter: • explain the situation • describe why it bothers you • suggest a solution

Dear Mr. Sam, I am writing to complain about the noise which has been made from a new neighbour who has moved two months ago. As you know, one of the most essential factors that keeps me and my family enjoying our life at the Fishers apartments is the peace and calmness of the area. Unfortunately,
this
peace could not stay longer due to the moving of the new neighbour. It seems to be fine with me that anyone would like to enjoy his life. But it would be stressful to family with children live with
such
noise. The trouble started two weeks ago when
this
neighbour had held multiple house parties at his place without having any considerations to his neighbours. My children could not be able to sleep well at night despite my complaints to him in person. Since I had talked to him in person without any response from his side, I suggest calling the police in order to solve
this
issue. I hope to take
this
complain into consideration and do the needful to solve it. Best regards, Zaid

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