Some people believe that watching TV is good and makes life more enjoyable. Others, however, feel that it is a waste of time. Do you agree or disagree? Give your opinion.

Suggestion
With
with
the huge
tecknonoly
advances in the
last
decades,
a human being
individuals
indivudals
have a large and easy
the right to enter
access
acess
to movies and TV programs. Nowadays, there
Suggestion
is
are
a large amount of individuals who like spending their
time
relaxing on their couch and catching on with the latest shows released. On one hand, some people think it is a waste of
time
, while others state that
it is
it's
it
a great way to make your day more
affording pleasure; being in harmony with your taste or likings
pleasant
pleasent
. In my
a personal belief or judgment that is not founded on proof or certainty
opinion
opnion
,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
think
it is
it's
its
not the best way to spend my
time
, but in
this
essay
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
will express my opinion about
this
statement.
First
of all
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
love watching movies. After a long day at work,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
like arriving home, eat my dinner, sit back
Suggestion
in
on
my chair, relax and watch a movie with my family. During the
any day except Sunday (and sometimes except Saturday)
weekdays
week days
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
think
it is
it's
its
a great way to spend your
time
because it helps you relax and get your mind off any problems you might have.
Suggestion
However
however
, there is always a different point of view to every situation. Beside the fact that
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
enjoy watching a couple TV programs,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
think enjoying quality
time
with your friends and your family doing some outside
any specific behavior
activities
activites
is more
of great significance or value
important
importante
. Some people get addicted to television and
do not
don't
dont
to anything else but laying in their beds seeing their
something regarded with special favor or liking
favourite
favorite
programs.
Suggestion
This
this
brings many disadvantages, like the lack of doing physical
any specific behavior
activities
activites
and health problems. I think it is more
of great significance or value
important
importante
to
engage in
make
do
as many different kinds of physical sports and activities because when we are older we will not be able to do them. To summarize,
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
think that when you are young and have the ability to do exercise, you should take advantage. Go out, play and socialize with other people.
Time
goes by and you will not be able to go back. When you are older,
Suggestion
that's
thats
the
time
you should sit down, relax and watch movies. It´s all about
time
the act of managing something
management
managment
. If
second person pronoun; the person addressed
you
your
are addicted to TV,
Suggestion
that's
thats
a waste of
time
, but if you only watch an occasional movie
refers to the speaker or writer
I
i
think
it is
it's
it
perfect
in the direction of
to
ro
chill.

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