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Internet social media have become very popular. To what extent do you think this is a good or bad thing? Why do you think this is the case? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Internet
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The internet
 has become the basic need
for
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 our day to day activities. A number of people think that it is a good sign for social media to become popular on the
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, while the others believe
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. I would like to discuss both the views of the topic in
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 with, the
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 has given
access
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 to communicate and
share
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information
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 with others around the world.
This
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 is because with the help of online social media being very popular like Facebook and Instagram, it has become very easy to connect and
share
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 new ideas with people around the world.
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, Facebook social groups, where people are interested in an idea or an event can join a group and
share
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information
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 with users in the group.
In addition
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 to that, spreading of awareness to millions of people in a short span of time is possible with the help of online social media.
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,
information
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 about a deadly virus named corona was spread across the
internet
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 and has saved millions of lives around the globe.
On the other hand
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, the
internet
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 has become the common place for identity theft and online scams. Online shopping where people tend to purchase goods are promoted to buy products for a huge discount from unauthorized websites,
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 results in stealing of credit card and personal
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. To illustrate, an online scam where people can invest in stocks had a promotion to get instant
access
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 to 1000 dollars by sharing their credit card and personal
information
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.
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, stealing of identity with the help of
information
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 provided on social networking websites, to
access
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 personal data from friends and others is a common practice. In conclusion, users should carefully
access
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 the
internet
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 making sure privacy as a top priority. Social media has provided a platform to
share
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 and communicate with people around the world.
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