Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people To what extent, do you agree or disagree?

It is an irrefutable fact that the trend of following celebrities among youngster rapidly increasing. Some people assert that most of the famous folks are known by their style and money as compared to their achievements and
this
would be a bad impact on teenagers. In my opinion, I totally disagree with the statement, youngsters influence by their bad habits. In
this
essay, I intend to support my views before reasonable conclusion can be drawn. There are several reasons why it does not influence badly on teens.
Firstly
, the person who becomes a celebrity, it means they have talent and best skills that’s why they are famous.
Furthermore
, if they have a beautiful face, that’s the main logic because nobody has glamour by nature.
Moreover
, if they struggle a-lot in his past life for that he is wealthy. For an example, there are many popular people who struggle in their life, after that they have all
Suggestion
these things
this thing
this things
such
as drake and so on.
On the contrary
side, most of the people attract by atrocious activities
such
as abusing in public and abuse drugs.
In addition
.
This
type of things could bad impact on the young generation. For an instance, the famous singer honey Singh lost his career because of using drugs and using bad language in songs. To put in a nutshell, I pen down and say that we don’t judge people by their glamour and richness. There are lots of struggle behind those people. It depends on people, which things they are followed bad or good things.

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