Some people say that every human being con create the art (e.9.paining), others think only the people born with the ability can create art. Discuss both views and give your opinion

Painting is one of the best
art
created by a human being, an
art
can explain rather than 1000 words. We came across development in arts over a past decade, which we
also
called as modern
art
. An
art
can explain a lot, but at the same time, it differs based on the people, who view the
art
. A good artist is distinguished from the
art
, which convey messages to very common people and who has vast knowledge in the
art
. Few people think, an
art
can be drawn only by the artist, who has a cold eye on each prospect and has the ability to convey to others. In a way, it could be acceptable. Every field have competent people and able to fulfil set of instructions as guided. The other way, it should be
also
taken into consideration, every person has their own imagination and ability to convey in a different way. It's mentioned on the internet, elephants are trained to draw and it can convey the messages to the world. I have my own view in a different aspect, rather comparing competent or incompetent can create
art
, we should leave the room for nature. Animals or human beings can convey a message, by creating
art
.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Read more in the eBook

The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »

* free ebook for Premium users

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

What to do next:
Try other services:

All the services are free for Premium users