Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Well
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developed
developing
development
countries usually provide
relating to or involving money
monetary
monitoring
monetory
a stipulated condition
provision
povission
to
not developed
undeveloped
undevelopemt
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countries, but
countries but
it
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never solves
never solve
their
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difficulties
difficulty
.
Consequently
,
possessing material wealth
richest
richiest
countries should come up with
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the help
help
of other
the condition of being essential or indispensable
necessities
necissites
other than
money
. According my opinion, well established countries ought to provide with important training and tools alongside with
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money, which
money which
might allow to train their people and establish factories to build a source of income which be the key to change the financial situation. Financially advance counties should extend their supportive hand with useful
the activities of educating or instructing; activities that impart knowledge or skill
education
eduaction
and tools to weakest countries. Earlier
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,
,
it
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happens
happen
many times
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,
,
poorer countries received monetary
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provision, but
provision but
in a systematic or consistent manner
consistently
consistantly
failed to improve
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the situation
situation
of their
country
due weak
involving financial matters
financial
fianacial
a sum of money allocated for a particular purpose
budget
bugdet
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,
,
dishonestly of authorized people
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,
,
corruption in many
a plane figure bounded by two radii and the included arc of a circle
sectors
sites
scetors
and poor education system.
For example
,
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South
south
a native or inhabitant of Asia
Asian
asian
country
a Muslim republic in southern Asia bordered by India to the north and west and east and the Bay of Bengal to the south; formerly part of India and then part of Pakistan; it achieved independence in 1971
Bangladesh
bangladesh
was struggling on poor
involving financial matters
financial
fianancial
structure till 2000. But, the politician’s bank became big to bigger and the
country
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stays
stay
poor for
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a long period
long periods
long period
of time.
Money
alone can’t grow a
country
to
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the next level
next level
without finding a key to drive forward.
Therefore
, richest
country
ought to reconsider to patronize to a creative way other than only
money
. Well established countries must provide adequate training and equipment to weak countries along with
money
. So, they can build a source of income and continue to grow.
For example
, before 1950 Kuwait was living under weaker list of
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country, but
countries but
countries countries but
country but
after receiving precise education and tools they were able recognize natural resources and other potential sector which drive them today's strong financial position. By and large, every poorer should
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receive
received
appropriate tools and training which is as crucial as
money
to build a
country
's economic situation. To sum up, richest countries ought to help weaker countries with providing tools, education and precise training
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along side
alongside
of
money
.
This
will secure a way
to begin
new era of
involving financial matters
financial
finacial
growth.

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