People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this?

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nowadays peoples' eating habits have changed and

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change involves that people have tended to consume more processed

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than ever before in the past. Shift in

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approach is due to present's hectic lifestyle.

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approach is associated with many health related problems.

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with, owing to the fast paced modern lifestyle, people have

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take the first step or steps in carrying out an action

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to consume processed

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, current global market is extremely competitive, due to which people are required to work harder and longer hours than they worked in the past and

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trend simply takes their cooking time away.

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, according to a research, more than half of the employees in

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, nowadays, spend most of their time at work

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of cooking their meals at home.

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, modern way of living allow people to be more competitive and stay emphasised at work, rather than actually devoting their time to cook fresh lunches and dinners.

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, there are serious consequences on individual's heath because of growth in processed

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consumption. Clearly, processed

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is made by altering

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natural form for peoples' comfort and convenience,

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as to make it taste better, though,

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process may

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connect closely and often incriminatingly

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adding chemicals, preservatives and sugar.

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, consumers may be taking

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the additional amount

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of sugar than recommended.

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, health

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diabetes, cardiovascular disease and obesity are directly connected to consumption of convenience

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. To conclude, being competitive in the global market has changed people to eat more processed

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and people have been facing problems associated with their health.

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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

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People eat more processed food than they did in the past. Why is this? What are the effects of this?

Include an introduction and conclusion

Some people believe that the government is wasting money on the arts and that this money should be invested better in other areas. To what extent do you agree with this view?

Since the beginning of the 20th century, the number of endangered species has increased significantly and we have witnessed more mass extinctions in this period than in any other period of time. What problems arise from this and how can they be tackled?