More and more people want to buy a famous brand with clothes,car and other items. What are the reason? Do you think it is positive or negative development?

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Worlds are changing rapidly that every fashion
become
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becomes
older
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day. These
lead
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leads
make people
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are made, people
are made people
brand
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conscious.
Majority
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The majority
of the members in the
society
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prefer to buy high standard goods
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as clothes and car. There are several causes
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is discuss
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discuss
are discussed
have discussed
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essay along with their impact on the
Developemnt
act of improving by expanding or enlarging or refining
development
of the economy. To start with, a person
always buy
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always buys
a
goods
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good
that is
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higher in price or a well known
brand
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. The reason behind
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thinking is to
creat
make or cause to be or to become
create
creates
a
brand
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image in the
society
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where they live. It is
commen human tendency
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a common human tendency
common human tendency
that people often show off their things to others. It
make
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makes
them
realised
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realise
that their standard of living is very high.
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, customer always trust on
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product
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a product
that is
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standardized. It means they do not have to check
product
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as it is certified and
tasted
tested and proved useful or correct
tested
.
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instance
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instances
, a car
enthusist always buy
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enthusiast, always buys
enthusiast always buy
enthusiast always buys
enthusiasts always buy
enthusist always buys
a BMW rather than any other car because of their marvellous looking and foreign
brand
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.
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, companies are more emphasising on
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products while
manufacturing
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manufactures
as they know very well that customer want quality
brand
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at any cost.
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, Nike
are making
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is making
high standard shoes which is to much costly Still buyer are buying as they trust
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in
the quality
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, these
trend
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trends
has
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have
several positive
impact
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impacts
.
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, there are wealthy people who buy
such
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sorts of costly things make companies selling a large number of products. Which make companies more profitable and ultimately it made sustainable economic development.
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, member
in
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of
society
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who never compromise
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on
quality will get
effective
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an effective product
the effective product
product
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such
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things make them more satisfy and fulfil their utility. To sum up, economic
changees
cause to change; make different; cause a transformation
changes
challenges
make people to
brand
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conscious. Reason for
this
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trend is they want to create a
brand
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image in
society
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and they buy
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product
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a product
that is
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certified and
tasted
tested and proved useful or correct
tested
. It has several benefits
such
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as, economic development and internal satisfaction.
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