Some people think that increasing communication usage of computers and mobile phones by young people has had a negative effect on their reading and writing skills. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

It is believed that in some nations owing to have guns by individuals results in an increase in the number of shootings. I agree with
notion to a large extent as
is worrying problem that looks set to continue.
To begin
with, issuing weapons by legal authorities
as guns to the army officers, civil officers, celebrities, affluent class is for the sake of their protection at home or any unplanned social events.
is because it makes them feel more secure and ready to tackle any danger
as terror activities.
For instance
, if any well-known businessman travels with valuable documents in order to fix important business deal, it would be helpful for him to have guns for his safety.
, having arms sometimes make individual life safer and easier. Even though it makes some people safe, the cumulative increase in sum of guns would proportionately increase a statistic of shootings in society. It is generally seen that aggression makes one oblivious about wrong and right decisions which leads to many unpremeditated crimes.
For instance
, The International Crime Bureau recently revealed statistics showing that more than 50% shooting by the private gun owner had done in the urge of getting revenge as a heat of the moment. Apart from
, many times guns at homes are accessed by teenagers for the urge of knowing how it works in the absence of their possessors and mistakenly it could cause serious happenings.
, it shows that easily accessible
making shooting more common. To recapitulate,
having guns made a segment of society protected, rise in the number of guns possesses has been widening the shooting rate in terms of reacting in short temper and using improperly by teenagers.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation


To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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