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The internet has greatly increased our access to information. To what extent do you think this is a good thing?

#internet #access #information
In
this
 modern world, due to advancements in
internet
 technology has made everything available online with just a single click. So it has become easy for everyone to gain knowledge about any topic. According to me, it is a positive sign because people can search for data at any
time
 and it improves the efficiency of
work
.
To begin
 with, people can find any type of information on the
internet
 at any interval of
time
, and most importantly from any place with fewer efforts. Previously, when the
internet
 was not available
then
 people had to go through the number of books and magazines to find the relevant about the topic which requires a lot of effort and
time
.
For instance
, when tourists visit a new country, they have little to no information about that place.
Therefore
, before visiting the nation, they search the websites through the
internet
 to know about the region.
Consequently
, they not only visit all the important places
there but
Accept comma addition
there, but
also
 makes their trip more enjoyable.
Hence
, it is a boon for the people and makes life easier.
Moreover
, people can learn with the help of material available on the
internet
. It improves their ability to do the
work
 and takes lesser
time
 to complete it.
For example
, when the students make projects on a certain subject in schools, they usually search on the
internet
 to know more regarding the subject so that they can gain in-depth knowledge of it and do not face any problem while making it.
Further
, it increases their accuracy in making the project.
Thus
, it is apparent that the
internet
 boosts the capability of doing
work
 and it is a good thing for the people. To
summerise
give a summary (of)
summarize
, people can access details on any matter whenever they needed and it improves the quality of
work
. In my opinion, the
internet
 is
boon
Suggestion
a boon
 for the people and it makes the life of the people easier by easily providing the particulars.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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