Some people say that the main environmental problem of our times is the loss particular species of plants and animals. Other say that there are more important environmental problems.  Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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that is
the loss of plants and animals, others say that there  are
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other
another
problems and
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no longer active; extinguished
extinction
extension
extincion
of any
species
of fauna and flora is the main problem of our
environment
Firstly
, there are a few animals and plants that take an important part in
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the environment
environment
.
For instance
, some plants make the air fresher
such
as trees and flowers, while some animals are good for soil
such
as a worm.
Secondly
, if some
species
of animals and plants are disappearing, others might
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go
gone
too. The reason is many
species
of plants are the food of other animals, while some of the animals are
also
made plants live stronger.
For example
, herbivore animals consume grass or green leaf to live, flower
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uses
use
some of the insects to
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grow
grown
and reproduction
On the other hand
, there are
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more environmental
more
environment
problems are
also
important too, not just animals and plants.
Firstly
, climate
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affects
affect
this
world, it
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also impacts
has also impacted
is also impacting
also impact
the
environment
the most. Some problems
such
as climate change make governments in many nations spend billions of dollars to handle each year, some particular
species
are no longer extant because of it.
Secondly
, human are
also
must take a
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responsibility
responsible
for
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the environment
environment
in recent years. People release
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although
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of to
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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