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The digram below shows the multistage production of pears as canned fruits. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the process below.

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The rendered process chart depicts information about the production of pears
step
 by
step
. It is clear that there are several stages, from hand picking to the final canned product. Overall, it can be seen that if any one
step
 is missing in
this
 process it can be difficult to make the pears, and it is a complex diagram. Having cast a fleeting glance,
first
Suggestion
the first step
step
 is hand picking, and
then
 transported to the factory. After washing the pears and quality checking they stored in cold store.
Next
, the pears are weighed and graded. After removing the peels, the pears are cut into slices.
Furthermore
, the sliced pears are packed in cans, after sealing the pears are ready for cooking. In
third
last
step
 the canes of pears are
labeled
bearing or marked with a label or tag
labelled
 and stored in storages.
Finally
, the pears are dispatched to the supermarkets for sale.
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