Because of improved technologies in communication and transport, people in some countries can now choose to live and work anywhere they want. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

An enhancement in the transportation has brought a vast change in the communication system through the countries, creating ample opportunities for migration.
This
movement has opened wide working opportunities to everyone, in whatever stream they are from. The chances for growth in the education and business fields are
also
clearly indicative due to
this
improvement worldwide. The impact on the economic growth is impressive as there are frequent transactions going in between the countries. The extinct of foreign affairs is remarkable with ingrowing career opportunities in the fields of software, engineering, banking, legal, compliance and many more areas. There is a global chance of immigration and settlement, these days with respective to the jobs and studies. People of one country can move to any other country for their higher studies,
such
as graduation, post graduation, diploma, advanced courses, research related Phd, etc., through a prescribed gateway. Even for a job, they can settle down with a work permit visa, or any other qualification
that is
necessary for
such
entry.
For example
, many children from places like India, Australia, France move to US or any other, for their education with a student Visa.
Likewise
, the working professionals move to Canada, UK, Switzerland and so on.
In addition
to
this
, people go on a visit to other countries like a family trip, friendly and official meetings, project conferences or to spend a pleasureful time. Some folks have a passion to travel, wherein, they love to see all famous places around the World. Conclusively, technology has improved a lot, along with the enrichment of the economy and people's relations.
Such
development is always healthy for everyone and the society too.
Submitted by Mrs. Sumira Vempati on

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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