Nowadays in many countries people are spending too much on weddings some people think that it is essential to spend a huge amount of money on wedding ceremonies others think that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion

Weddings are
most important
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more important
things in modern lifestyle. Some people believe that necessary to invest
large amount
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large amounts
a large amount
of
money
while, other believe that
wedding
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a wedding
the wedding
weddings
should be simple
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a first statement
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First
and foremost, Wedding is a major step of every individual person for that reason as a golden memory So, they spend lots of
money
for that reason
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Besides
this
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nowadays soft play a major role in modern Modern society due to
this
many people
follow
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follows
celebrities and they adapt fashion and style.
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For
instance, many wealthy families organise
wedding
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weddings
as per celebrities trend.
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others
believed that simple marriage is better.
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are several things that
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can save
can be saved
money
and other resources.
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example, food resources will be saved and
money
can be used for those who live in poverty.
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Not
only
money
saved from wedding
also
helpful for
fulfil
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fulfilling
their future plans
such
as house and other useful things.
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conclusion, it
can be said as every coin has two sides.
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I believe that people should give more priority to simple wedding rather than expensive ones.

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