Nowadays in many countries people are spending too much on weddings some people think that it is essential to spend a huge amount of money on wedding ceremonies others think that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion
Weddings are most important things in modern lifestyle. Some people believe that necessary to invest large amount of wedding should be simple . argument before reaching to an appropriate conclusion.
To comments with the , There are many things to be Shared in first statement . . ,nowadays soft play a major role in modern Modern society due to follow celebrities and they adapt fashion and style. for instance, many wealthy families organise wedding as per celebrities trend.
other believed that simple marriage is better. there are several things that can be save for example, food resources will be saved and not only fulfil their future plans To conclusion it can be said as every coin has two sides. but I believe that people should give more priority to simple wedding rather than expensive ones.
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