Nowadays in many countries people are spending too much on weddings some people think that it is essential to spend a huge amount of money on wedding ceremonies others think that have to be simple and not very grand discuss both views and give your opinion

Weddings are

most important

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more important

things in modern lifestyle. Some people believe that necessary to invest

large amount

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large amounts

a large amount

of

money

while, other believe that

wedding

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a wedding

the wedding

weddings

should be simple

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arguments

before reaching to an appropriate conclusion. To comments with the

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a first statement

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First

and foremost, Wedding is a major step of every individual person for that reason as a golden memory So, they spend lots of

money

for that reason

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Besides

this

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nowadays soft play a major role in modern Modern society due to

this

many people

follow

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follows

celebrities and they adapt fashion and style.

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For

instance, many wealthy families organise

wedding

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weddings

as per celebrities trend.

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other

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others

believed that simple marriage is better.

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are several things that

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can save

can be saved

money

and other resources.

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For

example, food resources will be saved and

money

can be used for those who live in poverty.

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Not

only

money

saved from wedding

also

helpful for

fulfil

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fulfilling

their future plans

such

as house and other useful things.

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conclusion it

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conclusion, it

can be said as every coin has two sides.

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But

I believe that people should give more priority to simple wedding rather than expensive ones.