There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do

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Dear Sir, I'm writing the letter to inform you about the present situation of
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service in my area.
Forely
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, the busses are not on time , there is no proper schedule of them. The busses are too much crowded in the morning because of office and school timing, and there is not any proper seating plan for ladies and gents. Because of these problems, I am persistently late from my office , which
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a bad impression on my reputation.
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, if they are on time , there is not enough space to even stand
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the bus, because of the rush of people and students. So, I am humbly requesting you to make a proper schedule of bus's arrival time
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and increase the number of transport so everybody can get space to sit or at least stand.Kindly divide some
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for ladies and gents so everybody can travel comfortably. I really appreciate
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you take notice of these problems. Best regards, XYZ

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • adhering to schedules
  • inconvenience
  • daily routine
  • punctuality
  • frequency during peak hours
  • overcrowding
  • commuters
  • update system
  • reliable
  • maintenance
  • breakdowns
  • irregular bus timings
  • passengers
  • delays
  • unreliable
  • appointments
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