There have been some problems with the bus service, especially its reliability, in your area over the last two weeks. Write a letter to the manager of the bus company. In your letter • describe what the problems are • explain how these problems are affecting you • suggest what you would like the company to do
Dear Sir,
I'm writing the letter to inform you about the present situation of
bus
service in my area. Correct article usage
the bus
Firstly
, the busses are not on time , there is no proper schedule of them. The busses are too much crowded in the morning because of office and school timing , and there is not any proper seating plan for ladies and gents.
Because of these problems, I am persistently late from my office which makes a bad impression on my reputation. Linking Words
Nevertheless
, if they are on time , there is not enough space to even stand Linking Words
in
the bus , because of Change preposition
on
rush
of people and students.
So, I am humbly requesting you to make a proper Add an article
the rush
a rush
schudle
of bus's arrival time Correct your spelling
schedule
,
and increase the number of transport so everybody can get space to sit or Remove the comma
apply
atleast
stand.Kindly divide Correct your spelling
at least
Correct your spelling
some
scome
area for ladies and gents so they can travel comfortably.
I really appreciate Correct article usage
the scome
if
you take notice of these problems.
Best regards,
XYZCorrect pronoun usage
it if
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