Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the pace with the advancement of technology, it is commonly recognized that the remarkable improvement of human's living standard. Nowadays, we can read news easily through the Internet and all the news that are under our

fingertips just

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fingertips, just

a click away on the screen to receive it effortlessly.

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, some people think that newspapers remain the most essential sources of news than the Internet.

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of all

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online reading news

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countless fake news and satire sites that public mistake for real new sources, for people can't distinguish the true and false. Many anonymous bloggers pass themselves off as journalists and spread news whose authenticity is hard to verify. They

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repost

to give an account or representation of in words

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some news repeatedly in order to let the more people tend to believe its content is truthful. Compared with the newspapers, the reliability of newspapers is higher than the Internet as news that publish at newspapers need to be checked by the government.

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, newspapers will evolve and focus on background stories and analysis of global events

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of breaking new.

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, Sunday papers that focus on the news of the week are highly popular in

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the same parts

of the world.It is different with the Internet which is mixed by the various news and without any explanation. In conclusion, either reading

news online

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the news online

or through newspapers, as a writer, we must use the objective point of view to analyse the authenticity of news and don't puzzled by the fake information.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

243 words

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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the most important source of news. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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People doing dangerous sport activities like scuba driving and bungee jumping should be responsible for their own life and rescue workers should not risk their lives to save people doing those sports. Do you agree or disagree?

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Some people believe that all wild animals should be protected. Others say that only a few wild animals should be protected. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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