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In some countries there is not enough recycling of waste materials. What are the reasons for this and some potential solution?

#countries #waste #materials
In
this
 day and age, recycling
is become
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has become
is becoming
becomes
 a heated issue that discussed by people around 20 years, for we are aware of the destruction towards the
environment
 and suffer natural disasters which are related to improper using recourses.
However
, there is not enough of doing recycling in some countries and causes many environmental problems.
Hence
, it is interesting to discuss the reasons for
this
 and the potential solution.
First
 of all, the
government
 doesn't take take the action to practice recycling effectively, causing the problem from occurring. As we know that the world's population is growing and the demand is growing with it, if the large number of
human
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humans
 do not implement recycling properly, the astonishing amount of waste materials will be piled up in the places of human living. It is undeniable that the world does not have enough resources to support the rapid using. Taking trees as an example, people cut down trees unrestrictedly to produce papers and if the recycling
also
 do not do well, people will suffer the
unaffordable
impossible to avoid or evade
unavoidable
 results.
On the other hand
, either
government
 or individuals must pay the effort to do recycling. The
government which
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government, which
 has the ability to change the laws and ensure that they are enforced can impose tighter controls on companies that do not treat or dispose of waste effectively. Meanwhile, even with the laws to protect the
environment
, individuals must cooperate with the
government
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government, such
such
 as
active
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actively
 reducing the amount of products they use on a daily basis and recycling more plastics and other materials automatically. In conclusion, in order to live in a clean and comfortable
environment
, all the public can't neglect the importance of recycling.
This
 is must rather than the choice, let us to protect and cherish our
environment
.
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