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The diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world. summarise the information by selicting and repeating the main features.

The diagram shows the main systems of writing used throughout the world. summarise the information by selicting and repeating the main features.
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This
 diagram illustrates the major writing
system
 around the world.
This
 can divide
to
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into
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 six categories: Logographic, Abjad, Abjuda, Alphabetic, and Syllabic From
this
 given, there are four main writing
system
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systems
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which
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in which
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 one
character
 represents sounds. The oldest is the Abjad, Arabic
for example
, where a
character
 indicates only one sound. Similar to
this
 is The Abjuda,
in
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apply
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which is slightly different in that each
character
 represents a consonant plus
vowel
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a vowel
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. The
third
 is Alphabetic used in English,
for instance
, a
character
refer
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refers
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 to vowels or consonants.
However
,
relationship
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the relationship
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 between spelling and pronunciation
sometime
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sometimes
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 is not always the same.
Finally
, Syllabic
system
, a
character
 show one syllable, used in Japanese Kana
In addition
 to these writing systems, there is
also
 the Logographic, which work on
different
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a different
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 principle. Here, each
character
 represents a word meaning
such
 as
Chinese
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in Chinese
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 and Japanese. It is possible for a
character
is
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to be
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 different when spoken but share the writing
system
.
Overall
, the diagram shows that
main
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the main
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 writing
system
base
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is base
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 on sound.
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