In order to study at university students are required to pay expensive tuition fees. Not all students can afford them so some people think that university education should be free for everyone. To what extent do you agree?

Fees for higher
education
are expensive and not affordable for everyone so according to some
university
the body of faculty and students at a university
University
should be free for all people, regardless of their background. In my opinion, offering
everyone
Suggestion
Everyone
free
university
education
would be problematic and,
therefore
, should only be offered to
certain
Suggestion
Certain
individuals. Having
free
Suggestion
a free university education
university
education
for everyone would put a tremendous financial strain on a country. Universities would have no income from fees and,
consequently
, they would rely completely on the
state
the federal department in the United States that sets and maintains foreign policies
State
for funding. Doing
this
means taking funds from other much needed areas,
such
as the health
system
Suggestion
System
, in order to allocate money to universities. For the majority of countries, particularly
developing
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Developing
and underdeveloped countries,
this
would not be a financially viable option. Another point to consider is that offering all people free tertiary
education
would tempt many
people
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People
to enter
university whether
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university, whether
they were interested or not.
In other words
, rather than
choosing
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Choosing
to get a job, some young people would opt for doing a degree to which they would only
half
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Half
-
heartedly
with gusto and without reservation
heartily
heatedly
apply themselves.
This
would not only be a waste of a country’s finances but
also
a
waste
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Waste
of human resources.
Finally
, the best solution would be to keep
university
fees but
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fees, but
still offer some free places to gifted
students
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Students
from poor backgrounds.
This
would ensure that talented, intelligent students who cannot
afford
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Afford
to pay for higher
education
would still get educated and trained.
As a result
, society would
benefit
financial assistance in time of need
Benefit
by getting the right people trained and valuable financial resources would not be wasted. In conclusion, abolishing
university
fees is not feasible for most
countries but
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countries, but
offering free places to
particular
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Particular
students who have limited financial means is a much better use of a country’s resources.
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