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Doing an enjoyable activity with a child can develop better skills and more creativity than reading. To what extent do you agree? Use reasons and specific examples to explain your answer

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Throughout the world, one of the parents’ concerns is that their children are being raised creatively and to achieve the creativity
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 of reading they use visual and intellectual games. These delightful actions have many beneficial achievements and contributes to the children will be more skills. I am a strong advocate of
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 approach, and I try to point out some of these benefits. On the one hand, according to official statistics myriad of children do not take pleasure from reading and continuing the trend will be considered a compulsion for them and the children will probably resist it. Learning through reading will be raised kids mono dimensional and creates lots of problems.
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, imagine a seller specializing in his field can’t be successful, on the ground that he has not learned social skills as well.
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, the best thing that parents can do for their offspring is to flourish their kids’ talents. The best way to fulfil
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 important is teaching kids through enjoyable activities. By
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 method fathers and mothers can discover their child’s genius and grow it.
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 attitude brings about the kids learn many skills at an early age simultaneously.
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, my three-year old daughter has learned many skills by
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 technique and notwithstanding her young age,
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 her native language, she has learned many concepts
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 as numbers, characters, shapes, and colours in English. In conclusion, as I mentioned above, teaching by interest is more sufficient
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then
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than
 reading for kids. I highly recommended as a father, don’t restrict your babies just by reading.
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