Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

Life can be how you want it to be. Few individuals prevent making any modifications in
of them or themselves
their
there
thier
lives
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longing to spend it as it is. Others tend to
to become aware of through the senses
perceive
percieve
that change is positive. I strongly agree considering the statement that change is always a good thing. Helps you grow
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Everything is advancing
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,
there is advancement in technology
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transportation and pretty much in every sector that our every day lifestyle
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cover
covers
. Being fixated on not learning how to use a mobile or travelling on a bicycle
would not
wouldn't
wouldnt
be a wise decision
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One has to blend with the flow and welcome the new.
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example, with
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our mobiles if in today's world we choose to write a letter and post it than simply texting
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it will be wastage of time
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money and efforts. New opportunities are introduced
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If you're unwilling to have a broader view of
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life, then
life
then
there's not much you can get out of it
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,
on the
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contrary, if
contrary if
you attract yourself towards new paths you can have a fresh start
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for
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example, if
example if
you are a doctor and you have never tried playing any sport
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and once you do
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you might find out that athletics
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are
is
a better genre for you than biology ever was. Change can be fearful
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One may not achieve or get what they must have thought how the things are going to be which can be scary
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for
example
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a person has decided to shift from from his 35 years old ancestral home in the village to the city and is not as humbled by the people as back at his place
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nor is he able to find a suitable job
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In a nutshell
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blending is important
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although
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obstacles, but
obstacles but
nothing is impossible and the world stops for none
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So change must always be
recognized or made known or admitted
acknowledged
acknowleged
as it will
without question and beyond doubt
definitely
definitley
be
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a good decision
good decision
good decisive
good decisions
good deciding
good decesion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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