doctors recommend older people for exercise regularly. however, some people do not excersie. what are the causes?

Due to the detrimental health problems, health workers are recommending aged masses to do a physical workout on a daily basis,
most of them did not pay much attention to it. The reasons has been expatiated in the upcoming paragraphs. Admittedly
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advance aged people are usually not are about the decisiveness of exercise; in spite of
, they believe the myth that plethora of work is equal to the time they devote to keeping their body strength.Owing to which, elder persons do not focus on their wellbeing, even if their physician insists on it.
, they get attacked by various problems of fitness.
For instance
, Robert Smith, Ex CEO of Apple, died of pancreatic failure because he gave significant importance of his body conditions at that pragmatic period of time. Indubitably, people of forty plus age, being committed towards making their loved ones brighter future.So, they invest most their quality time for their betterment.Despite of, going for regular workout, which might be recommended to them by their doctor.
, they develop
their adolescents
support system effectively in comparison to focusing on themselves.A survey was conducted by the Human Welfare Society, Mumbai, in September 2019 concluded that 79% of teenagers are earning as well as living a comfortable life because their parents sacrificed their not only energy but
life for their
. To recapitulate
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if the masses are not aware of the significance of body fitness as well as being committed towards making their children's future, aged masses will not focus on exercising enormously and inefficient way.
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