Some people think that it is better to educate boys and girls in separate schools, others, however, believe that boys and girls benefit more from attending mixed schools. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The topic of whether boys and girls should be taught in mixed schools has been a contentious issue ever since the initiation of women’s rights movements. Some argue that the practice of teaching boys and girls in the same school should be upheld, while others refute
this
. Both sides of
this
debate will be analysed in
this
essay before a reasoned conclusion is drawn. In one camp, it is believed that educating boys and girls in a co-education system reaps numerous bounties.
For example
, most women rights activists contend that instructing males and females together enhances the understanding between the two genders.
This
equips members of both genders with the necessary skills which can later be transferred into their personal lives, and as
Suggestion
a result
result
enjoy a higher degree of matrimonial bliss.
Thus
, it is clear why many people support the idea of co-education.
On the other hand
, many consider the practice of educating girls and boys separately is best.
For example
, Saudi Arabia is often mocked for its conservative culture. Despite
this
, Saudi Arabia has one of the lowest rape and sexual assault rates in the world. One of the reasons cited for
this
is the segregation on the basis of gender in the educational institutes. When looking at
this
side of the debate, the benefits that are derived from separate schools for girls and boys can be seen.
Although
both sides of
this
argument have indisputable virtues, it is felt that
Suggestion
the practice
practice
of educating male and female pupils in the same school is much more of a positive development than negative.
Therefore
, it is hoped that the trend of co-education schools will continue to be the norm the world over into the foreseeable future.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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