Creative artists should always be given the freedom to express their own ideas (in words, pictures, music or film) in whichever way they wish. There should be no government restrictions on what they do. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion.

It is a controversial topic that gifted artists have to be given the opportunity to exhibit their opinion regardless of what their methods are. I personally believe that there should be a mechanism to control and assess the performance of artists, and

this

essay will discuss two main reasons why

art

makers should be under supervision.

First

of all, government and political staff always point out that movies,

art

, and music cause social unrest throughout the country. The concepts presented in these forms of

art

may generate conflict between governments and citizens that, in extreme cases, could break out civil war. In Syria,

for instance

, we can see that conflict between governments and

citizens

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citizen

ideology destroyed bonds between people, and it has torn the country apart and a large amount of people, especially children,

are dying

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is dying

.

However

, there is one exception that we might mention where the work of artists has contributed to positive changes in human history-one of the positive changes being democracy as we can see in many countries.

Secondly

, in case of children, controlling

art

works under the supervision of professional experts or agencies plays a vitally important role in children’s upbringing and education. Because

art

has been one of the main sources to educate children

nowadays so

Accept comma addition

nowadays, so

that school curriculums encompass the all

aspect

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aspects

of

art

, which have significant impact on their lifestyle as well as their long-term goals.

Furthermore

, we need to hand traditional

art

down to future generations so that government has to give more attention to preserving it. In recent years, traditional

art

has been destroyed by new trends of

art

coming from overseas and artists

also

tend to accept these deliberately. To conclude, the products of

art

makers should be assessed by qualified experts, especially by pedagogical experts, so that we can prevent social instability and misunderstandings. It

also

might be mentioned that artists

also

need to have a desire to qualify their performance based on a universal approach and that their work need to promote the fabric of society.