Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree

It
is often believe
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is often believed
that working from
home
has numerous
prones
question or examine thoroughly and closely
probes
prunes
prions
while it is part or full
time
.
where
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Where
other people
are not agree
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don't agree
do not agree
with
this
. Nowadays every
people
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person
wants to spend a quality
time
.
Accept space
.
To
commenc
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
commence
with the reason
first
and foremost is, those people who working from
home
can support their family.For an example, they can take care of their children
also
.So that children or an old person of a family who needs more support can easily get.Their children
grows
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grow
are grown
up with love and
confidrnce
freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
confidence
.
Secondly
, working environment.
Working environment
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The working environment
at
home
is not similar to the
official
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office
environment.
As a result
, sometimes
besides
official
work
people can easily do their household
work
also
.
Thirdly
,
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,
save
time
and money.Which people do their household
work
at
home
they can easily save their money and
time
also
.They don't need a
made
a female domestic
maid
servant at
home
.These people are more
concious
intentionally conceived
conscious
about their health.Adding
further
more point is
,
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,
these people are more
careing
feeling and exhibiting concern and empathy for others
caring
and sharing.Their
tolerancy
the power or capacity of an organism to tolerate unfavorable environmental conditions
tolerance
level is
more higher
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higher
than others. A group of people
are disagree
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are disagreeing
with
this
.Because, at
first
they think that, working outside of the
home
is more beneficial than from
home
.Outside jobs carried a large amount of salary.
Shiffting
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Shifting
Sifting
the
second
school thought
,
Accept space
,
those people who are doing lots of
work
at
home but
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home, but
some of their family members are not satisfied about
this
.
so
to a very great extent or degree
So
that
,
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,
they always fall in trouble.
Further more
in addition
Furthermore
point is, one family is more dependent on earning person.As a result
,
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,
they expect a good amount of salary from them.
On
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In
my point of view
,
Accept space
,
I reinforce my opinion that
,
Accept space
,
it is better
to
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for
mother's
work
from
home
and fathers
work
outside of the
home
.

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