Nowadays many people work part or full time from home. Some people say that working from home has many benefits while others disagree

It
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is often believed
is often believe
that working from
home
has numerous
question or examine thoroughly and closely
probes
prunes
prions
prones
while it is part or full
time
.
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Where
where
other people
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don't agree
do not agree
are not agree
with
this
. Nowadays every
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person
people
wants to spend a quality
time
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.
.
To
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
commence
commenc
with the reason
first
and foremost is, those people who working from
home
can support their family.For an example, they can take care of their children
also
.So that children or an old person of a family who needs more support can easily get.Their children
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grow
are grown
grows
up with love and
freedom from doubt; belief in yourself and your abilities
confidence
confidrnce
.
Secondly
, working environment.
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The working environment
Working environment
at
home
is not similar to the
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office
official
environment.
As a result
, sometimes
besides
official
work
people can easily do their household
work
also
.
Thirdly
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,
,
save
time
and money.Which people do their household
work
at
home
they can easily save their money and
time
also
.They don't need a
a female domestic
maid
made
servant at
home
.These people are more
intentionally conceived
conscious
concious
about their health.Adding
further
more point is
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,
,
these people are more
feeling and exhibiting concern and empathy for others
caring
careing
and sharing.Their
the power or capacity of an organism to tolerate unfavorable environmental conditions
tolerance
tolerancy
level is
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higher
more higher
than others. A group of people
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are disagreeing
are disagree
with
this
.Because, at
first
they think that, working outside of the
home
is more beneficial than from
home
.Outside jobs carried a large amount of salary.
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Shifting
Sifting
Shiffting
the
second
school thought
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,
,
those people who are doing lots of
work
at
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home, but
home but
some of their family members are not satisfied about
this
.
to a very great extent or degree
So
so
that
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,
,
they always fall in trouble.
in addition
Furthermore
Further more
point is, one family is more dependent on earning person.As a result
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,
,
they expect a good amount of salary from them.
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In
On
my point of view
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,
,
I reinforce my opinion that
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,
,
it is better
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for
to
mother's
work
from
home
and fathers
work
outside of the
home
.

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    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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