The number of older people is increasing. Some people think it will cause problem to their countries, others believe this group is important to the society. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.

There are different

believes

any cognitive content held as true

beliefs

about the increasing number of aged people. While several people are pointing that it will create a bad situation for the whole country, others argue that it can be a beneficial substance

to

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of

society.

This

essay will

first

describe both of these sides and

then

after I will conclude my personal opinion. It is undoubtedly true that increasing retired workers will less involve in the challenging work.

Moreover

, due to their low immune system at

this

age, they required huge medical treatment throughout their life journey.

Result

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The result

of

this

, they

can not

can not

cannot

earn good

money

and

can not

can not

cannot

pay the taxes, and they have to rely on the facilities sponsored by the government.

Thus

, the financial burden on the government will increase, and eventually, the economy of the country will be down. At the other side, people urge that older group of people is vitally important to the community because of their vast knowledge and many years of practical experience.

In other words

, the information and skill that senior people have can save company’s huge

money

and time.

For example

, if an IT guy stuck at some error,

then

the senior person who has seen

such

errors numbers of times can solve it quickly.

Hence

, it saves precious time and

money

spent on the research, and the junior person can

also

learn it quickly. In conclusion,

although

older people demand medical expenses and provide

less contribution

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a less contribution

to the tax, I believe that they can guide and enhance productivity which saves

money

. In the end, it is an indirect benefit to society.