People living in large cities have to face many problems in everyday life. What are those problems? Should the government encourage people to move to regional towns?
Whether to live in the convenience of big cities or the beauty of rural areas is a topic that has been long debated. Many
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that both have its advantages and disadvantages. present reasons and arguments
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Although
, large cities have its problems Linking Words
such
as pollution, not enough family Linking Words
time
and increased levels of anxiety and depression, the solution is not to shift the individuals living in urban areas to rural ones. Use synonyms
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this
essay will focus mainly on the aforementioned issues and the steps the Linking Words
government
can take in order to tackle these problems.
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Firstly
, pollution in various forms Linking Words
such
as air or water has presented itself as an issue Linking Words
to
all parts of the world, even though it may have affected some more severely than the others. The rising number of industrial and manufacturing factories have significantly contributed to Suggestion
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Although
, leading companies Linking Words
such
as Transworld have taken the initiative to reduce waste and preserve the environment by implementing several corporate social responsibility activities, the total negative impact has not drastically changed. Laws need to be implemented wherein the number of factories operating in an area Linking Words
are restricted
. Suggestion
is restricted
Government
officials must ensure that proper industrial waste management services are set in place before a factory is given approval.
Another major problem faced by those living in large cities is that they do not get enough Use synonyms
time
to relax and spend with their family and friends. Individuals are so overwhelmed by work that they complain about not getting any personal Use synonyms
time
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However
, a recent survey conducted in the United States of America revealed that Linking Words
majority
of the Americans would work and try to earn more if they were given an extra day in a week. Suggestion
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government
of Canada by introducing 'Family day' which meant that individuals were not allowed to work and expected to spend Use synonyms
time
with their loved ones. Countries Use synonyms
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as Sweden and Norway have Linking Words
also
gained much praise for their remarkable work-life balance. Linking Words
Such
strategies need to be introduced Linking Words
world wide
in order to ensure the physical and mental well-being of the public.
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worldwide
Furthermore
, the lack of personal Linking Words
time
and a well-built community has elevated the levels of anxiety and depression by individuals living in cities. Use synonyms
Therefore
, the Linking Words
government
, in collaboration with companies should take the effort to ensure that employees working at any tier in the hierarchy are given sufficient opportunities and outlet to vent and express their concerns and complaints. Use synonyms
This
could be promoted in the form of group and individual Linking Words
counseling
sessions or even taking employees out on company trips.
In conclusion, people living in large cities are posed with many threats to their physical and mental health. something that provides direction or advice as to a decision or course of action
counselling
Nonetheless
, moving them to rural areas will not solve the problems as it would just cause an unequal distribution of population which would lead to conflicts relating to resource availability. Linking Words
Instead
, it would be more useful for the Linking Words
government
officials of different countries to implement strategies similar to the ones that are mentioned above in a way Use synonyms
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most suitable for their country.Linking Words
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