An increasing number of people are buying what they need online. What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individual and companies shopping online .

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Nowadays
Nowdays
, People are influenced by the online shopping which is increasing.
Although
online Shopping has several
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advantages, but
advantages but
the thing named or in question
it
its
has some disadvantages for
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identifying
identify
the products. In my opinion, Company online shopping is one of the easiest
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ways
way
to get the products in the short
time
. To
take the first step or steps in carrying out an action
begin
bargain
began
begain
with, company online shopping is better for the
time
consuming.
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Some
some
time
we did not get enough
time
to go shop that
time
we place the order in online.
Furthermore
, sometimes
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I
i
forget to
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shop
shopping
when
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I
i
come back from my office so
that is
why its help me
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a lot
lot
. Individual shopping online
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is also providing
has also provided
also provides
is
also
provide us
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the best
better
price
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.
.
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When
when
we are browsing online that
time
we see different type of products which is cheap.
Moreover
, there are
also
more individual pages where we can compare the price. In example,
last
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time, although
time
although
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I
i
was buying a mobile phone from companies
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site, but
site but
the price was very low
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on
in
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the individual shopping site
individual shopping site
.
However
, quality is the Major issue
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with
in
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the company online shopping site
company online shopping site
company's online shopping site
companies online shopping site
.
Furthermore
, in their catalogue sometimes they are presenting good quality image of the
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products, but
products but
physically that are not same.
Moreover
,
to a distinctly greater extent or degree than is common
especially
specially
when we order some grocery item that
time
we figure out some quality issue.
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Much
Many
of Individual online shopping
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has
have
no
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licence, so
licence so
license so
licensee so
licsence so
that’s why they cheat with customers.
In addition
, individual online
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sometime offers
sometime offer
the fake news
also
send fake product.
Furthermore
, some individual online shopping sites only prefer to pay
first
after delivery in that case maximum people cheated by online. In conclusion, online shopping is very
regarded with great favor, approval, or affection especially by the general public
popular
people
poplure
around the world. Though
the thing named or in question
it
its
is very easy to
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shop
shopping
without
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moving, but
moving but
we
can not
cannot
can not
figure out the products without seeing think it is better for us to buy from online
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shops
shopping
because it will
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provide
provides
us free delivery in
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a short time
short
time
.

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