You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say : Why you need to use this private room What you need them to provide for the party inquire about the price of the food you are ordering.

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Dear Sir, I am writing

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letter to inquire about the availability of the party room in your hotel on 28th April

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2025 for my brother's 16th birthday celebration. I,

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my family have visited your restaurant several times and love the delicious food and the ambient environment of your restaurant. When we were deciding about the place where we can organize the celebration your service comes to my mind first. With regards to the party, there will be around 30 people including kids. I am hoping you have organized family parties so far and know the nature of gatherings and quick service as required. Regarding dietary restrictions, some of them are vegetarian and some need gluten-free food. Please let me know the menu options and price per head for organizing

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dinner at your place. I will wait for your confirmation regarding the availability of the party hall on 28th April

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2025 from 6:00PM to 9:30PM. Thanks for your time and attention. Yours Faithfully

gulati.ashima7Thu Apr 03 2025

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Consider including a brief introduction or background for the celebration to enhance engagement.

coherence and cohesion

You may want to ensure the transitions between your points are smooth for improved flow.

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The letter is polite and maintains a suitable writing tone throughout.

coherence and cohesion

Good use of separate paragraphs for different aspects of the request, which aids clarity.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

166 words

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You are going to have a family party in a private room in a hotel. Write a letter to the hotel manager and say : Why you need to use this private room What you need them to provide for the party inquire about the price of the food you are ordering.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

Some people say that wild animals have no place in the 21st century, and the protection is a waste of resources. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

In recent years a large number of highly skilled professionals like doctors, engineers and IT professionals from poorer countries are migrating to developed countries for better-paying jobs. What are the possible problems of this and what solutions can you suggest to deal with this issue?

Some people say that the experiences a child has before starting school have the most influence on their future life. Others say that experiences as a teenager, especially at school, are more influential. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

.some people think that all university students should study whatever they like. ohters believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future , such as those related to science and technology. discuss both views and give your own opinion

Poor nutrition and obesity is a problem in many developed countries and some people believe that a tax on fast food would reduce the problem. Do you agree?