We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

Technology has invaded our modern
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lifestyle
life style
.
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Using
using
computers becomes essential for us. They used in several fields like hospital, crime investigation and in Airports.
This
using will be increased by the time and affect our future positively. One of the most important advantages of using computers is long distance education.
This
kind of education provides
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a great chance
great chance
for developing countries students. They can
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enrol
enroll
in big universities all over the world from their own place. In
this
way, they can save more money they could spend on
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travelling
traveling
.
Also
, they cannot waste time for attending literatures. The materials of most of these courses are available online on the same sites. Another benefit of
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the computer revolution
computer revolution
is giving the working mothers a good opportunity to work at home, and take care of their children as well. There
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is
are
a lot of sites offer these kinds of jobs which can do at home on computers.
Such
as typing some documents or translate some texts to another language. For people who love private business, they can find a golden chance on the internet to build their business from home. They can just pay for
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building
build
their own business website and begin to show their products online. The claiming and paying are both online by credit cards or visa cards or so. Actually, change doesn't always mean going to bad, in
this
case, technology services our modern
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lifestyle
life style
and make it
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more convenient
more convenience
. To sum up, computers can serve our
life
in the future in education field and in work. And we shouldn't worry about that change. Change is the
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nature
natural
of
life
.

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