We are becoming increasingly dependent on computers. They are used in business, hospitals, crime detection and even to fly planes. What things will they be used in the future? Is this dependence on computers a good thing or should we be more suspicious of their benefits?

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Technology has invaded our modern
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life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
.
using
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Using
computers becomes essential for us. They used in several fields like hospital, crime investigation and in Airports.
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using will be increased by the time and affect our future positively. One of the most important advantages of using computers is long distance education.
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kind of education provides
great chance
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a great chance
for developing countries students. They can
enroll
register formally as a participant or member
enrol
in big universities all over the world from their own place. In
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way, they can save more money they could spend on
traveling
the act of going from one place to another
travelling
.
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, they cannot waste time for attending literatures. The materials of most of these courses are available online on the same sites. Another benefit of
computer revolution
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the computer revolution
is giving the working mothers a good opportunity to work at home, and take care of their children as well. There
are
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is
a lot of sites offer these kinds of jobs which can do at home on computers.
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as typing some documents or translate some texts to another language. For people who love private business, they can find a golden chance on the internet to build their business from home. They can just pay for
build
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building
their own business website and begin to show their products online. The claiming and paying are both online by credit cards or visa cards or so. Actually, change doesn't always mean going to bad, in
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case, technology services our modern
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life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
and make it
more convenience
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more convenient
. To sum up, computers can serve our
life
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in the future in education field and in work. And we shouldn't worry about that change. Change is the
natural
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nature
of
life
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  • Smart traffic management
  • AI (Artificial Intelligence)
  • Machine learning
  • Personalized treatment
  • Virtual classrooms
  • AI tutors
  • Smart homes
  • Energy consumption
  • Grocery shopping automation
  • Data analysis
  • Decision-making assistance
  • Efficiency
  • Mainstream adoption
  • Predictive algorithms
  • Personalization
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