Today more and more tourists are visiting places where conditions are difficult, such as the Sahara desert or the Antarctic? What are the benefits and disadvantages for tourists who visit such places?

Many visitors are showing their interest to visit troublesome places, like Sahara deserts or the Antartic,
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at
in
the present time. Tourists can gain various exciting experiences from an adventurous
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trip, but
trip but
there are many drawbacks to be taken into account.
Firstly
,
one
of the
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advantages
advantage
of touring in challenging
place
is that it is full of adventure. Those, who travel on regularly, may get bored by seeing normal touring spots, so that an adventurous journey can become a blessing for them.
Secondly
, if
one
wants to enjoy the beauty of nature closely,
then
he needs to go through some troublesome ways.
For example
, to see the animals of
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the Amazon jungle
Amazon jungle
,
one
has to stay in the wood for
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a couple
couple
of days without any support of modern facilities.
Thirdly
, despite some risks, difficult visiting places are less crowded, so
one
can enjoy his time.
For example
, after going in Sundarban of Bangladesh, if
one
does not enter into the jungle, he will never see the beauty of the tiger, crocodile
etcetera
.
On the other hand
,
one
problem of travelling awkward
place
is that there no facilities for
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tourists
the tourist
tourist
. In some places, it is totally difficult to provide any kinds of emergency support,
such
medical or security facilities.
For example
, on the peak of the Mount
a mountain in the central Himalayas on the border of Tibet and Nepal; the highest mountain peak in the world (29,028 feet high)
Everest
Averest
, if a person needs instant medical help, it will be very difficult for him to get because of the
not encouraging or approving or pleasing
unfavourable
unfavorable
weather. Not only the transportation problem could occur in
such
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place, but
place but
also
there might be no proper telecommunication system. Another possible problem is the lack of food shops.
One
must have to carry own food items to eat and water to drink. In conclusion, while it is beneficial to have an adventurous experience
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of
by
moving into a
place
where conditions are extreme in many ways, but it can lead to
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difficult situations
a difficult situation
difficult situation
,
such
as no medical support or no food or water.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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