Learning english at school is often seen as more important than learning local languages. If these are not taught, many are at risk of dying out.In your opinion is it important for everyone to learn English. Should we try to ensure the survival of local l eppa akhil's picture

The most common
language
is
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
which spoken all around the world. In schools, it is believed that
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Significantly
significantly
necessary as much as local languages, even more important
oftenly
. I will briefly explain by supporting
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
learning is crucial for
all people
everyone
everone
, it is possible that
in addition
to preserve local languages. Doubtless, universal
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communication, language
communication
language
is
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
, so many lecturers support to learn it more detailed than local ones.
For example
, the children who are
having succeeded or being marked by a favorable outcome
successful
successfully
succesful
at
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
skills can find a good job opportunity. They can work at universal companies or even they can move there. It provides them a better life
a basis for comparison; a reference point against which other things can be evaluated
standard
standarts
. Not only good life,
also
intelligence and knowledge levels can peak due to
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
. Many global and
trustable
news, new researches, articles
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is published
publishes
are published
in
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
. When the children learn at from it in their
of first rank or importance or value; direct and immediate rather than secondary
primary
primarly
education, they can get a habit to track
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
angles
english
.
On the other hand
, local
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languages, sometimes
languages sometimes
are forgotten. Many
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schools
school
prefer teaching only
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
, so ethnic spoken languages
can not
cannot
can not
live
at the present or from now on; usually used with a negative
anymore
any more
. It
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may be
maybe
in
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the minority
a minority
minority
, many people are consciously how important their
language
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of
for
living culture. To preserve both
language
and culture in schools by teaching both languages are mostly.
For example
, many universities in Turkey have
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an alternative choice
alternative choices
the alternative choice
alternative choice
for education
language
. The students can choose their
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course
courses
language
. So, local ones and universal can
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speak
spoken
, multicultural area has developed. In conclusion, I restate, İn my perspective
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
is
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the universal language
a universal language
universal
language
and
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at
in
all education levels should
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teach
teaching
. Admittedly, the young people have
an Indo-European language belonging to the West Germanic branch; the official language of Britain and the United States and most of the commonwealth countries
English
english
skills
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more successfully
more successful
with a high intelligence and knowledge grade. Due to it, ethnic
a particular society at a particular time and place
cultures
cultural
culturals
should be preserved by youth as a heritage.

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