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Some people believe that unpaid community service should be compulsory part of high school programs (for example working on charity, teaching sport to younger people) To what extend do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, preparing children for their social responsibility is a crucial part of both
school
 and parents. For achieving
this
 goal, we should try to encourage high
school
 students to take part in voluntary jobs in different aspects.
in
Suggestion
In
 my point of view, I am in
favor
promote over another
favour
 to make these jobs obligatory for them. To start with, I think these kinds of mini-jobs can be a useful experiment for students and it can improve their career potential.
Besides
 that, they can learn new skills and enhance their workmanship, to be more productive in their society.
For instance
, in the UK, primary
school
 students have to do a little job in the summer that they are more obsessed with and at the end of each month, they should write a report for their
school
 consultant. To sum up, it will give them a great perspective in which field they want to work. Another reason that we may have
to
being one more than one
two
 obligatory these kinds of programs is that
firstly
 it can give
youngers
reason by deduction; establish by deduction
infers
 a sense of
fulfillment
a feeling of satisfaction at having achieved your desires
fulfilment
 and confidence to use their potential in a better way.
Secondly
, they would learn to help other mankind is
such
 a respectful action and they will learn that we have a duty to our other fellows.
Finally
, it can be a turning point for some students to take their lessons more seriously and try to be more helpful for their community. In conclusion, I totally agree to make these free community
services obligatory
Accept comma addition
services, obligatory
 for students, because it has so many beneficial results for them
also
, it can be a game-changer for some students to understand the life meaning.

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