You ride a bicycle to work, but there is a problem with the parking. Write a letter to the manager of the Parking Management Company.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Shirley and I am writing to ask for a parking spot in our office premises. I have been working here as a postdoctoral fellow for two years. One week ago, I moved out of the
staff
dormitory on campus since new
staff
are eligible only for a two-year accommodation in the university. Currently I am living in a place
that is
about 2 kilometres away from the campus. Given
this
distance, riding a bike is the optimal option. I noticed earlier in the handbook of
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
staff
that all university
staff
must apply for parking slots
Suggestion
for
from
you to park their bikes or automobiles.
Therefore
, it would be much appreciated if you kindly advise when and how I could be allocated a parking slot. I look forward to your reply. Yours Sincerely, Shirley

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