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Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

#rubbish #governments #amount
It was agreed in modern times a tendency of
trash
 amount is giving rise.
This
problem
 coursed by individual development in different spheres and people obtaining goodness in their lives.
Firstly
, the hugest reason of producing rubbish occurs in
plastic
 packaging and using
plastic
 bags.
For example
, in Ukraine more than 80% of plants and factories use
plastic
 packaging all their products.
However
, 40 years
ago it
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ago, it
has been using
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was used
 paper for
this
 purpose long time, which is easy to recycle. On
this
 occasion comparing nowadays the
problem
 with rubbish exists and needs essential decisions and activities.
Secondly
, it's true that people want to follow a fashion.
This
 fact necessitates changing furniture and equipment by households.
Nevertheless
, in the past people had less opportunities to buy new house
staff
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
. So, they hey repaired it and have been using their fixtures during long time.
Also
, it shows the increasing of magnitude of waste now. To my mind, the government
have
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has
 the most powerful influence on solving
this
problem
. In my point of view the news collecting
trash
 programs and packaging materials and using
plastic
, lows, opening new manufactures of recycling garbage. And of course the important step exists in encouragement activities and events
for
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in
 the population.
For instance
, I visited Austria and
notesed
being perceived or observed
noticed
 how the
trash
 is sorted in a lot of kinds
such
 as metal glass, paper, bio waste,
plastic
.
This
 process
make
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makes
 easier and quicker to recycle
trash
. As for me, Austria gives a great example for other countries. So,
this
problem
 is really serious in producing
waste but
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waste, but
this
 is a solution for it. Government can take
actions
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action
 and of course with all people's help.

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