Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

It was agreed in modern times a tendency of
trash
amount is giving rise.
This
problem
coursed by individual development in different spheres and people obtaining goodness in their lives.
Firstly
, the hugest reason of producing rubbish occurs in
plastic
packaging and using
plastic
bags.
For example
, in Ukraine more than 80% of plants and factories use
plastic
packaging all their products.
However
, 40 years
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ago, it
ago it
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was used
has been using
paper for
this
purpose long time, which is easy to recycle. On
this
occasion comparing nowadays the
problem
with rubbish exists and needs essential decisions and activities.
Secondly
, it's true that people want to follow a fashion.
This
fact necessitates changing furniture and equipment by households.
Nevertheless
, in the past people had less opportunities to buy new house
the tangible substance that goes into the makeup of a physical object
stuff
staff
. So, they hey repaired it and have been using their fixtures during long time.
Also
, it shows the increasing of magnitude of waste now. To my mind, the government
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has
have
the most powerful influence on solving
this
problem
. In my point of view the news collecting
trash
programs and packaging materials and using
plastic
, lows, opening new manufactures of recycling garbage. And of course the important step exists in encouragement activities and events
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in
for
the population.
For instance
, I visited Austria and
being perceived or observed
noticed
notesed
how the
trash
is sorted in a lot of kinds
such
as metal glass, paper, bio waste,
plastic
.
This
process
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makes
make
easier and quicker to recycle
trash
. As for me, Austria gives a great example for other countries. So,
this
problem
is really serious in producing
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waste, but
waste but
this
is a solution for it. Government can take
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action
actions
and of course with all people's help.

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