Write a letter to a tour agency and say Where did you see this advertisement? Explain why are you suitable for this job. Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.

Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest
for
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the position of an English speaking
tour
guide in your company '
Tour
Travels' in reference to the advertisement in the Tribune on 15/03/2020. I have completed the
post graduation
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post-graduation

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in History from Delhi
university
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University

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, Delhi, and have
an
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apply

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excellent speaking and writing skills in English which are
must
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a must

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for your job to communicate with
the
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foreign tourists.
Furthermore
, I have
an
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experience as a
tour
guide in Star travel which is in Rajasthan and
additionally
, I
also
possess
in depth
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knowledge of all the
tourists
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tourist's
tourists'

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places here.
However
, the condition of most of the tourist places in our region is
pity
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a pity

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and
this
need to be improved.I think
government
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the government

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should impose entry fees in order to collect the revenue, which in turn, can be used to
further
preserve the infrastructure of these historic buildings.
Thus
improvement in the architect and premises of ancient forts and museums will attract numerous tourists to these places. I hope that I
fulfill
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all the necessary credentials to be a
tour
guide in your organisation.Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours'
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Yours

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faithfully, Raghu
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