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Band 6.5

Write a letter to a tour agency and say Where did you see this advertisement? Explain why are you suitable for this job. Suggest how to improve your local area to attract more tourists.

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Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest
for
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 the position of an English speaking
tour
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 guide in your company '
Tour
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 Travels' in reference to the advertisement in the Tribune on 15/03/2020. I have completed the
post graduation
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 in History from Delhi
university
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, Delhi, and have
an
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excellent speaking and writing skills in English which are
must
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 for your job to communicate with
the
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foreign tourists.
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, I have
an
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experience as a
tour
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 guide in Star travel which is in Rajasthan and
additionally
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, I
also
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 possess
in depth
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 knowledge of all the
tourists
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 places here.
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, the condition of most of the tourist places in our region is
pity
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 and
this
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 need to be improved.I think
government
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the government
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 should impose entry fees in order to collect the revenue, which in turn, can be used to
further
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 preserve the infrastructure of these historic buildings.
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 improvement in the architect and premises of ancient forts and museums will attract numerous tourists to these places. I hope that I
fulfill
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 all the necessary credentials to be a
tour
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 guide in your organisation.Hope to hear from you soon.
Yours'
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Yours
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 faithfully, Raghu

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