children nowadays spend a great deal of time watching television. However television cannot replace the book as learning tool, which is why are less well educated today. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

Nowadays children are getting
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a poor education
poor education
due to the frequent habits of watching
television
. At any cost
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,
,
television
will not replace
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books
book
.
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Even though
Eventhough
television
is incorporated with various
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knowledgeable
knowledgable
programs its not sufficient to gain knowledge compared to
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the book
a book
books
book
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.
.
That is
why I agree to the above mentioned reasons.
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Watching
watching
television
makes the children to get rid of some physical activity to refresh their mind.
Besides
that just sitting
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in front
infront
of the
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television
televisions
telvision
for long hours increases health problems, particularly the eye are getting strained due to the powerful lights and rays emitted from
television
.
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Eventually, many
Eventually many
children at
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a young age
young age
tend to wear a
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spectacle
spectacles
Many of the tv shows still contain knowledge oriented programs
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,
,
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in spite
inspite
of that children get attracted very much to
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cartoons
crayons
cairns
caroons
and some entertainment shows. Apart from that
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,
,
reading habits among children has decreased rapidly due to the interferences of social websites and
television
.
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Even though
Eventhough
television
has a wide variety of academic programs it will not equal treated to book. While we are watching any academic programs
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on
in
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television, there
television there
will be a chance of
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lots
lot
of distraction in between that like
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an advertisement
advertisements
advertisement
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,
,
mind changing to switch over to another channel. But when we are reading books that type of distraction should be minimized
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.
.
Children are just wasting their leisure hours by spending most of their time involving in watching
television
. By the way there may be a chance of low level performance in their studies. At the same time playing some indoor games and
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chatting
chatinng
with each other are
also
decreased rapidly due to the impact of
television
.

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