Some People think the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, masses put a lot of efforts to remain

healthy so,

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healthy, so

they join various fitness centres to do an exercise;

however

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, a group of individuals

believe

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believes

that routine actions are enough to keep the

body

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in shape. In my opinion, going to

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gym

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the gym

is significant as it helps in doing the full-

body

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workout as compared to daily actions where there is only partial movement of the

body

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with, the

gym

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is a specially designed health centre with many exercises that works on every part of the

body

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, there are many training drills in the

gym

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such

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as pull down, dead lift, squats and bench press. All these exercises work on shoulders, upper and lower back, legs and chest respectively. These physical activities not only increase the strength of the muscles in a

body

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but

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develop them.

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, if the masses go to

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gym

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the gym

, it enhances the logical as well as analytical skills of the people because it escalates the supply of oxygen and blood to the brain.

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, in a survey, it was found that individuals who go to the

gym

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have a more intelligent quotient level as compared to those who do not do it.

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, joining a

gym

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is necessary to keep the

body

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fit.

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, if people depend on everyday activities

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as climbing stairs and walking, these only work on certain parts of the

body

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. To illustrate, while walking and climbing the stairs, there is a movement of the lower part of the

body

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but hardly any movement of the upper part.

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, other parts of the

body

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do not get trained.

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, it does not improve any mental health because there is no increase in blood supply to the brain by performing

such

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activities.

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, it has a little effect on the

body

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. To summarize, according to me, joining a

gym

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makes people healthy, and daily activities are

also

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a type of workout, but has limited benefits.

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Mar 4, 2020

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
4
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

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330 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

cardiovascular health
resistance training
physical endurance
muscle tone
caloric expenditure
sedentary lifestyle
motivational factor
fitness regimen
holistic health
sustainable exercise habit
metabolic rate
physical exertion
exercise consistency
health maintenance

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Some People think the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Include an introduction and conclusion

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