Some People think the best way to stay fit is by joining a gym/health club while others think doing everyday activities such as walking and climbing stairs is sufficient. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Nowadays, masses put a lot of efforts to remain

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healthy, so

healthy so,

they join various fitness centres to do an exercise;

however

, a group of individuals

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believes

believe

that routine actions are enough to keep the

body

in shape. In my opinion, going to

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the gym

gym

is significant as it helps in doing the full-

body

workout as compared to daily actions where there is only partial movement of the

body

To begin

with, the

gym

is a specially designed health centre with many exercises that works on every part of the

body

For example

, there are many training drills in the

gym

such

as pull down, dead lift, squats and bench press. All these exercises work on shoulders, upper and lower back, legs and chest respectively. These physical activities not only increase the strength of the muscles in a

body

but

also

develop them.

Further

, if the masses go to

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the gym

gym

, it enhances the logical as well as analytical skills of the people because it escalates the supply of oxygen and blood to the brain.

For instance

, in a survey, it was found that individuals who go to the

gym

have a more intelligent quotient level as compared to those who do not do it.

Thus

, joining a

gym

is necessary to keep the

body

fit.

On the contrary

, if people depend on everyday activities

such

as climbing stairs and walking, these only work on certain parts of the

body

. To illustrate, while walking and climbing the stairs, there is a movement of the lower part of the

body

but hardly any movement of the upper part.

Therefore

, other parts of the

body

do not get trained.

Besides

, it does not improve any mental health because there is no increase in blood supply to the brain by performing

such

activities.

Hence

, it has a little effect on the

body

. To summarize, according to me, joining a

gym

makes people healthy, and daily activities are

also

a type of workout, but has limited benefits.

Wed Mar 04 2020

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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
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Prediction or recommendation

Example:

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In conclusion
To conclude
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Finally
In a nutshell
In general