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1. Both the poor and the rich find the accessibility into university difficult. Do you agree or disagree?

#accessibility #university
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It is tough to enter
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into
 a
university
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 for both underprivileged/unfortunate and privileged/fortunate. In my opinion, I have agreed with the statement because of the strict entrance conditions of many worlds well known universities.
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, the graduate record examination requirements of the worlds well known universities, students have to take GRE test and must have to achieve a minimum GRE score in order to get
admission
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 in that universities if the students are failing to success in getting required GRE scores, they will not be succeeded in getting
admission
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in
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into
 that
university
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although
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 they are rich or poor.
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, some universities have conditions
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 as no supplementary in the earlier examinations for students to enter into a particular discipline.
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, a student wants to take
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 in the
graduation
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graduate
 program
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at
 a particular
university
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, he should pass all the examinations without any supplementary up to the twelve grades in order to fill full the no supplementary requirements and
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 criterion is applied to all applicants without discriminating between underprivileged and privileged.
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, every
university
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 has its own criteria to evaluate the student’s entrance into the particular disciplines. Some universities have compulsory professor recommendations for considering students for
admission
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 into particular subjects and without considering students financial status. A professor selects a student based on his capabilities
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 as educational achievements, sports, volunteer activities and research works done by the students.
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 evaluation is unbiased and completely based on the student’s past performances without considering the students are fortunate or unfortunate. In conclusion, it is not easy for underprivileged and privileged students take
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 in
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university
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a university
 without fulfilling
universities
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university
university's
 pre
admission
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 requirements.
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