17. In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved?

Unnatural ways of living of humans in most of the nation have caused drastic fitness issues. The following paragraphs will elucidate possible reasons for the problems and propose a handful of remedial measures. To commence with the reasons,
first
and foremost is obsessed of humans with junk
food
. Now a day, fast
food
shops are opened in every area and very easily approachable. Junk
food
is readily available at any
time
, so people feel cooking is the waste of
time
and the start eating these junk foods available in the streets, stores and in the mobile shops. These unnatural habits lead to fitness problems in the humans.
Secondly
, lack of daily
exercise
is one of the many causes of creating
health
issues in the humans. Most of the people are lazy or over involved in their daily works, so they forget to go for daily
exercise
or they do not have
time
to go for routine
exercise
or walk. Some of them intentionally do not want
exercise
as they are obsessed to watch movies, dramas and playing games in their free
time
. Adding
further
a few reasons,
such
as unwanted over pressures due to the work and bad habits like smoking are the additional reasons to live unhealthy. To exemplify, in 2010 a
health
survey had been conducted in Pakistan and it was found that 70% of the people living in Pakistan had severe
health
problems due to the unhealthy ways of living which was only 30% ten years earlier in 2000. Undoubtedly, every lock has a key.
Similarly
, some solutions should be implemented
such
as the Government should promote healthy ways of living through advertising in Television and in daily newspapers. Not only Government as well as people should avoid eating unhealthy
food
and try to cook
food
in homes
such
as vegetables are the best organic
food
for
health
. Government should take action against
unhygienic
ways for selling
food
and should stop
food
mobile shops on street if these shops have not followed
food
quality procedures.
Moreover
, gardens and running tracks should construct by the local authorities of the area in the neighbourhood. Which are easy to access and motivate nearby living habitats for daily
exercise
and walks. To conclude, I would like to state that Governments and peoples, both should put their best foot forward together in order to curb the menace and should promote and adopt natural ways to live a healthier, longer, fitter and better life.

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