17. In many countries, people have health problems because they choose to live in unhealthy ways. What do you think the reasons for this and how can it be solved?

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Unnatural ways of living of humans in most of the nation have caused drastic fitness issues. The following paragraphs will elucidate possible reasons for the problems and propose a handful of remedial measures. To commence with the reasons,
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and foremost is obsessed of humans with junk
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. Now a day, fast
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shops are opened in every area and very easily approachable. Junk
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is readily available at any
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, so people feel cooking is the waste of
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and the start eating these junk foods available in the streets, stores and in the mobile shops. These unnatural habits lead to fitness problems in the humans.
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, lack of daily
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is one of the many causes of creating
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issues in the humans. Most of the people are lazy or over involved in their daily works, so they forget to go for daily
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or they do not have
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to go for routine
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or walk. Some of them intentionally do not want
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as they are obsessed to watch movies, dramas and playing games in their free
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. Adding
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a few reasons,
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as unwanted over pressures due to the work and bad habits like smoking are the additional reasons to live unhealthy. To exemplify, in 2010 a
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survey had been conducted in Pakistan and it was found that 70% of the people living in Pakistan had severe
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problems due to the unhealthy ways of living which was only 30% ten years earlier in 2000. Undoubtedly, every lock has a key.
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, some solutions should be implemented
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as the Government should promote healthy ways of living through advertising in Television and in daily newspapers. Not only Government as well as people should avoid eating unhealthy
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and try to cook
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in homes
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as vegetables are the best organic
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for
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. Government should take action against
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ways for selling
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and should stop
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mobile shops on street if these shops have not followed
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quality procedures.
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, gardens and running tracks should construct by the local authorities of the area in the neighbourhood. Which are easy to access and motivate nearby living habitats for daily
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and walks. To conclude, I would like to state that Governments and peoples, both should put their best foot forward together in order to curb the menace and should promote and adopt natural ways to live a healthier, longer, fitter and better life.
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