Nowadays the way many people interact with eah other has changed because of technology.

These days, the way people communicate with each other has changed due to technology.
between people has become easier and more accessible over the years. Some people think that it affects
well, when others think the opposite. In
article, it is believed that both opinions are true.
today is a very important part of today, but of course there are negative and positive aspects. We now have a lot of different
ways e.g. f
to face t
messaging, social media, email and y
But sometimes people cannot express themselves well on these platforms, and their contact with others is badly affected because the people they talk to may not even know that
in reality. So, we have to be very careful when communicating on these platforms.At the same time,
on these platforms is very easy for people because we can communicate with a single c
lick no
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matter how far or busy the
you want to meet. On these platforms, we can even send photos and videos to the
we want to talk to.
In other words
, we can see how the other
lives. In short,
on these platforms depends on how we do it.
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