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Nowadays the way many people interact with eah other has changed because of technology.

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These days, the way people communicate with each other has changed due to technology.
Communication
 between people has become easier and more accessible over the years. Some people think that it affects
communication
 well, when others think the opposite. In
this
 article, it is believed that both opinions are true.
Communication
 today is a very important part of today, but of course there are negative and positive aspects. We now have a lot of different
communication
 ways e.g. f
ace
Suggestion
Face
to face t
alking,
Suggestion
talks
 messaging, social media, email and y
outube.
Suggestion
YouTube
But sometimes people cannot express themselves well on these platforms, and their contact with others is badly affected because the people they talk to may not even know that
person
 in reality. So, we have to be very careful when communicating on these platforms.At the same time,
communication
 on these platforms is very easy for people because we can communicate with a single c
lick no
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click, no
matter how far or busy the
person
 you want to meet. On these platforms, we can even send photos and videos to the
person
 we want to talk to.
In other words
, we can see how the other
person
 lives. In short,
communication
 on these platforms depends on how we do it.
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