The diagram below shows how the Australian Bureau of Meteorology collects up-to-the minute information on the weather in order to produce reliable forecast. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The steps of
Australian Bureau
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the Australian Bureau
of Meteorology for
give
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giving
information
about the weather are four: incoming
infomation
a message received and understood
information
, analysis and
forescasting
a statement made about the future
forecasting
,
reparing
make ready or suitable or equip in advance for a particular purpose or for some use, event, etc
preparing
repairing
repeating
the
broadcast
and
broadcast
. In the
first
stage what is incoming
information
, there are
satelite
man-made equipment that orbits around the earth or the moon
satellite
satellites
, radar and drifting buoy, who collect
datas
a collection of facts from which conclusions may be drawn
data
details
about the weather, and in the
second
part will be
study
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studied
in the stage called “analysis and
forescasting
a statement made about the future
forecasting
”. After that they have the
information
, they
preparing
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are preparing
prepare
the
broadcast
for select the data who will be in their homes.
Finally
Accept comma addition
Finally, this
this
information
the people could watch in the
broadcast
througth
from beginning to end
through
television, radio, or telephone.
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