Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is it a negative or positive development? Give your explanation using some relevant examples from your experience.
Children are the future of any Country and their proper
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development, both
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child
may be good in one subject and not as good in others. But there are many parents who fail to praise their children on getting distinction in one subject rather they will scold them on not getting appropriate marks in the other subject.
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taking the prime seat in the nation’s development, the Education
Institutions has increased
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have increased
child
scoring 60 percentage, but in the present scenario, the child
scoring 60% is not able to get admission in the recognized colleges all over the world. A student scoring 90% also
has to wait for his selection. As the priority is given to those scoring 100 percentage of marks .
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situation, parents have no other choice but to build pressure on their children.
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suffers as he feels burdened and
is unable to perform. He is always scared of his parents and not able to fully concentrate on his studies as well, due to which more and more children are becoming the victim of depression and the suicide cases are Accept comma addition
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is just a myth, as parents need to help their children in their studies and encourage them to become a responsible citizen of the country.Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
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