Billions of dollars are being wasted each year in space research . The money could be better used to improve conditions on eart. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

What is
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the universe
a universe
universe
? Are we alone in the
universe
? These questions are always raised by the people to solve the
be a mystery or bewildering to
puzzles
puzzels
of
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the universe
universe
every year
(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
millions
million
millon
and billions dollars are
the state or fact of existing
being
been
spent by countries.
However
Accept space
,
,
some people believe that
money
requests polite permission
could
coule
be immensely handy if it spend for mankind
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,
,
living organism and to enhance the beauty of out planet. I partly agree with
this
school of thought. Many people are curious to enrich their knowledge about planets, galaxies as well as is the life exist somewhere or we are alone
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?.
?.
To find the appropriate answers many organizations are working together and giving their best.
Moreover
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,
,
space research programs are highly
requiring attention or action
imperative
imperitive
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,
,
in the
last
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decade, scientists
decade scientists
resolved many mysteries
such
as some years ago people believed only seven galaxies are
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exist, but
exist but
with the aid of humble telescope we came to know there are
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
enumerous
galaxies
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,
,
stars and planets.
Furthermore
, NASA
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(
(
national aeronautics and
the unlimited expanse in which everything is located
space
soace
administration) proved that
money
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spent
spending
on space projects are worthwhile when they
set up or found
launched
lainched
their robot on mars surface to seek the
a future prospect or potential
possibilities
possibility
posibilities
of life
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over there
overthere
. For epitome,
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Neil
neil
United States astronaut; the first man to set foot on the Moon (July 20, 1969) (1930-)
Armstrong
armstrong
was the
first
person who landed on the surface of
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the moon
moon
and he set the example for
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the whole mankind
whole mankind
On the other hand
, no doubt there id advancement in
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science, but
science but
some parts of the world people are starving and prone to famine and
the state or fact of existing
being
dyeing
ding
deing
.
For example
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,
,
in
a republic in extreme eastern Africa on the Somali peninsula; subject to tribal warfare
Somalia
somalia
many people forced to live in worse places as a
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
result
results
resilt
of
this
it gives the birth of critical diseases
such
as
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Ebola
ebola
,
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corona virus
coronavirus
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,
,
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SARS
sars
etc. Even though, logging are being done on high
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level, which
level which
is main problem of pollution and
also
putting the lives of animal in imperil
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,
,
so the
money
should be given to the needy persons.
Last
but not least
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,
,
some nations are not affluent to provide the
being or involving basic facts or principles
rudimentary
rudimentry
things to their citizens and their youngsters get
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deprived
deprive
of
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the educationbin order
educationbin order
of that
ignorance resulting from not reading
illiteracy
illetracy
and poverty are rising. In conclusion,
money
should be spent by taking ponder whether on space research programs or for global issues but giving the
money
only one side is not productive both matters are vital,so i partly agree with
this
school of thought that
money
should not be spent on
universe
research projects

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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