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Billions of dollars are being wasted each year in space research . The money could be better used to improve conditions on eart. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement

#billions #dollars #year #space #research #money #conditions #eart
What is
universe
Suggestion
the universe
a universe
? Are we alone in the
universe
? These questions are always raised by the people to solve the
puzzels
be a mystery or bewildering to
puzzles
 of
universe
Suggestion
the universe
 every year
millon
(in Roman numerals, M written with a macron over it) denoting a quantity consisting of 1,000,000 items or units
millions
million
 and billions dollars are
been
the state or fact of existing
being
 spent by countries.
However
,
Accept space
,
some people believe that
money
coule
requests polite permission
could
 be immensely handy if it spend for mankind
,
Accept space
,
living organism and to enhance the beauty of out planet. I partly agree with
this
 school of thought. Many people are curious to enrich their knowledge about planets, galaxies as well as is the life exist somewhere or we are alone
?.
Accept space
?.
 To find the appropriate answers many organizations are working together and giving their best.
Moreover
,
Accept space
,
space research programs are highly
imperitive
requiring attention or action
imperative
,
Accept space
,
 in the
last
decade scientists
Accept comma addition
decade, scientists
 resolved many mysteries
such
 as some years ago people believed only seven galaxies are
exist but
Accept comma addition
exist, but
 with the aid of humble telescope we came to know there are
enumerous
amounting to a large indefinite number
numerous
 galaxies
,
Accept space
,
stars and planets.
Furthermore
, NASA
(
Accept space
(
national aeronautics and
soace
the unlimited expanse in which everything is located
space
 administration) proved that
money
spending
Suggestion
spent
 on space projects are worthwhile when they
lainched
set up or found
launched
 their robot on mars surface to seek the
posibilities
a future prospect or potential
possibilities
possibility
 of life
overthere
Suggestion
over there
. For epitome,
neil
Suggestion
Neil
armstrong
United States astronaut; the first man to set foot on the Moon (July 20, 1969) (1930-)
Armstrong
 was the
first
 person who landed on the surface of
moon
Suggestion
the moon
 and he set the example for
whole mankind
Suggestion
the whole mankind
On the other hand
, no doubt there id advancement in
science but
Accept comma addition
science, but
 some parts of the world people are starving and prone to famine and
deing
the state or fact of existing
being
dyeing
ding
.
For example
,
Accept space
,
 in
somalia
a republic in extreme eastern Africa on the Somali peninsula; subject to tribal warfare
Somalia
 many people forced to live in worse places as a
resilt
a phenomenon that follows and is caused by some previous phenomenon
result
results
 of
this
 it gives the birth of critical diseases
such
 as
ebola
Suggestion
Ebola
,
coronavirus
Suggestion
corona virus
,
Accept space
,
sars
Suggestion
SARS
 etc. Even though, logging are being done on high
level which
Accept comma addition
level, which
 is main problem of pollution and
also
 putting the lives of animal in imperil
,
Accept space
,
so the
money
 should be given to the needy persons.
Last
 but not least
,
Accept space
,
some nations are not affluent to provide the
rudimentry
being or involving basic facts or principles
rudimentary
 things to their citizens and their youngsters get
deprive
Suggestion
deprived
 of
educationbin order
Suggestion
the educationbin order
 of that
illetracy
ignorance resulting from not reading
illiteracy
 and poverty are rising. In conclusion,
money
 should be spent by taking ponder whether on space research programs or for global issues but giving the
money
 only one side is not productive both matters are vital,so i partly agree with
this
 school of thought that
money
 should not be spent on
universe
 research projects
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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