Successful sports professionals can earn a great deal more money than people in other important professions Some people think this is fully justified while others think it is unfair. Write both views and your opinion.

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Professionalism is the most important character trait in today's world. Athletes in sports world, earn a lot more than any other profession. Some people find it fair while others argue about it. I tend to agree with the former as it is the hard work of one person that helps him attain heights and

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, how he uses the money he earned.

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and Foremost, athletes around the world, earn more from endorsements,

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of sports. Most of the athletes gain a majority of their income from advertisement, either by promoting a product or posting about it online.

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, Cristiano Ronaldo, a renowned soccer player, earns close to a million dollar's per Instagram post. It is because he has more than 50 million followers.

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, a normal average in Instagram is around 1000 followers. All the above factor's help athletes to earn a lot more than other professionals.

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, Professionalism should not be measured on the basis of salary. To illustrate

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, a medical professional, is paid to save life and keep people healthy.

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the only source of income for them. Most of the population judges a professional's success on the basis of his income, while it's one's own interest that will thrive him for excellence and attain height in their field of work.

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there are a certain percentage of professionals in the field of science and technology who earn more than athletes, which is rare. In conclusion,

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, most of the professional's get paid a lot lesser than sport professional. In my opinion, athletes earn more because of their popularity, and less because of the industry they work in.

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Topic Vocabulary:

financial remuneration
exceptional
merit
talent
demand
entertainment value
career span
physical demands
justified
unfair
criticism
income inequality
societal priorities
sportsmanship

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