some people think that scientist experimenting with animal in a laboratory is the only way we can guarantee new products will be safe for human life. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

Scientific experimenting with animal
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gradually becomes
gradually become
a popular
way
among scientists for coping with some disease. Some people think it is harmful and the others disagree with that. I believe we have to do
such
experiments to prevent
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serious
spurious
sarious
dangers
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to
for
human
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life, but
life but
this
way
should be used only for essential matter. On the one hand, If
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a scientist
scientists
scientist
had not tested
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any
some
vaccines on animals the human generation might have
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extinct
extincted
so far. In some
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cases, humans
cases humans
life
may be at risk and
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the scientist
scientist
must choose human health rather than animal health.
Moreover
, some experiments are not harmful for animals
such
as FMRI or any experiments which used for testing medical instruments. Even if we want to test every experimental
way
, It is better to do
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with
on
those animals whose are going to die.
On the other hand
all
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creators
creator
have the right to
life
and no one can not hurt them for experimental reasons.
Although
, Experiment on animals is the easiest
way
, It is not the only
way
.
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Nowadays
Nowaday
, simulating the human's
body
enable scientists to predict Whether
this
medical
way
are effective or not. According to a
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statistic
statistics
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of
to
80% medical experiments are predictable to what extent
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is
are
harmful thanks to simulating
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human
human's
humans
body
. Beside
this
, Experimenting on animals in some cases may does not have acceptable results because, the
body
of that animal may have not the same mechanism
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for
to
responding the treat with human's
body
and it may be clear in the future. To sum up,
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However, any
However any
creature
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has
have
the right to
life
and no kind-hearted person will not
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accept
accepted
doing
such
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experiments, but
experiments but,
it is necessary for
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the human's life
human's
life
to
such
experiments will be done in future.

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