You are planning a business to another city. You will have some free time to do some sightseeing while you are there. •Write a letter to a friend who lives in the city you will visit. In your letter •Explain the purpose of the trip • Ask about thing to do and see in the city • Invite your friend to do something with you during your visit

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Dear Phoenix, How are you? It seems years since we

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saw each other in Vancouver. I hope you and your family are all well. I am so excited to let you know that I will have a business trip to Calgary for two weeks. I know you are living in

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, I am very happy to see you if you have free time. My company plans to expand its business to Calgary in the second quarter of 2024, so I will be there to do some surveys about customer habits and identify some potential locations for our new branch.

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my schedule will be occupied with work-related activities during weekdays, I will have some free time on weekends to

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sightseeing and experience the city's culture, can you recommend any attractions to visit? I heard there is an excellent restaurant in the city

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, how about if we have dinner there together? I can't wait to hear from you. Best wishes, Lana

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