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Some people think that exercise is the key to health while others feels that having a balanced diet is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Being healthy is very important in once life. There can be different ways of making the life healthier like a segment of people think that
exercise
 is key to be healthier and other thinks
diet
 plays a crucial part in being more fit. From my side, both things play simultaneous roles to become healthy and active in life. In
further
 paragraph, I intend to discuss both the view points and
then
 given my opinion. On one side, many think
exercise
 is important to remain healthy and to greater extend it is beneficial. From the current work routine people had to sit or stand for hours in the workplace. Due to which they're walking time is reduced and can lead to health issues like back problems, hump and much more. So to overcome
such
 problems
exercise
 routine should be followed. Before going to work, go for a walk or gym, or try doing yoga or other home
exercise
. Through
this
 individual to become more active and can concentrate better in their jobs. In present time
exercise
 is must for all age group people due to their lifestyles. On the other side, the mass of people think that
diet
 plays vital role in maintaining the body. Nowadays younger generation tends to eat more junk food which is the main cause of the deadly disease like obesity, diabetes, cardiovascular problems, etc. To resolve
such
 issues people should start taking low calorie food. These days, many new
diet
 charts come in market in which Keaton
diet
 is trending, which had helped people to reduce their weight to get extend. In fact, now people started understanding the importance of food items and reduced the intake of cheesy and oily items. In the conclusion, I would like to pen down, saying that, strict routine for
exercise
 and
diet
 should be followed to maintain the health of the body.
Exercise
 is important to change the form of the body and a healthy
diet
 is required to get essential nutrients, which helps a person to stay active and fit.

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