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Should Private Schools Receive Government Funding?

#schools #government
The number of private institutions
is
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has been
increasingly
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increasing
 recently, which raises a debate whether
government
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the government
 should support these private places with funding. In my opinion, private schools should not be beneficiaries from
government’s budget
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the government’s budget
 because of following reasons.
To begin
 with, private schools are usually considered to possess a financial strength which is illustrated by modern facilities and a great number of
high
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highly
 qualified teachers.
This
 is mainly due to the fact that students attending at these educational
organizations mostly
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organizations, mostly
 come from higher income families where their parents are willing to pay for expensive tuition fee.
In addition
, these institutions are usually possessed by
wealthy individual
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wealthy individuals
a wealthy individual
 or big corporation.
Therefore
, it would be unnecessary for governments to aid these schools with funding.
On the other hand
, it will be unfair for public schools if governments decide to allocate budget to private ones.
Meanwhile private
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Meanwhile, private
 institutions have their owned budget to afford for their operations; state owned schools are totally dependent on financial supports from governments.
This
 support is already limited will be declined if authorities start giving out to another. It will lead to numerous difficulties and degrade their educational quality.
For example
, state institutions might not pay for their teachers because of lacking of money and
therefore
 best teachers will move to private ones who are willing to offer the much higher salary.
In addition
, In conclusion, private schools should not be beneficiaries from governments because of their financial strength. Government should focus on public sections to ensure the education quality in
whole country
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the whole country
.

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